feedback

I had a really good time tonight getting into shape again. My voice and playing guitar, that is. It felt really good, and I wrote some more of my new one. Man, it rocks!!! It's so good, I love it!!! However I want some feed back. I want to know if my lyrics make sense to anyone besides me.

It goes a little something like this...

"It almost seems, like I could get there without anything, easily alone.
It almost seems like I'm there already.
If I could get past myself. If I could let go and let God
It's not like I don't know there's so much more than what I see
Thank you for not showing me all at once.
Protecting me and my eyes. My eyes.

I thought I knew. I thought I had it all figured out.
'what more could there be?'
but it seems not everything fits inside my head,
inside my limited brain.
Hallelujah, you really are God.
It's like I almost forgot who you are.
And all the while I thought I remembered.
You are the Way, the Truth, and the Life.

Turning points come so close to breakdowns
It's hard to tell the one from the other
But in the end it's all or nothing
You hve to own my mind, my eyes, my heart, my soul, my life....."

It's not done yet nor set in stone, but thats what have right now.